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Would you like to know, how fragments feel

It's hard to tell really, when so many different emotions,

are reflecting back at you

You wont find them in the air, sea, nor in me
you will find them on the ground

They belong there, in soil
where grass will grow, and men builds over

No archaeologist will assemble me correctly
No artist can capture my style
No amount of adhesive will hold these as one piece

I live only to breath into struggling lungs
and maybe if those would be in my blood, bone and soul

They too could understand.

Maybe, if each finds a piece of me and comes together
there will be too much to break, to hard to crack that ice

Traditional, fixed form, free verse and pretty words

So many ways I can tell you

But in the end,                          

         I don't want
        to                  piecing this together  
        sound      I am      
             like  
Every artist no matter what, will always have their skill. That is something that will always be a factor when writing a new piece, or drawing with grey, or painting with many colors.

But I will agree and can not refuse, when you really feel down, in an emotional up roar there is a change in your writing, obvious yes, but there is a reason when the best of us can come out. You feel what so many writers and artists of old felt, even if the result doesn't look good to you.

Needless to say, i'm better now.

And yes I don't care about the errors in this one.
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AngelicDirt Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
:clap:
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SurrealNacre Featured By Owner May 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Amazing. you touch such a good topic :D
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Ellen-Souler Featured By Owner May 26, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I'm trying harder, it's been a while since I wrote something that was a hit haha but thanks I just write to write
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SurrealNacre Featured By Owner May 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
same :) keep it coming!
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Ellen-Souler Featured By Owner May 26, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
will do, I have a sort story I wrote I will post tomorrow it's been a while since I have made one
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SurrealNacre Featured By Owner May 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
cool can't wait :)
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6-9Changeling Featured By Owner May 26, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:huggle:
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Ellen-Souler Featured By Owner May 26, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thankssssssssssss
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6-9Changeling Featured By Owner May 26, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
C:
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QuirkyBrainiac Featured By Owner May 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Lovely :happycry:
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Ellen-Souler Featured By Owner May 26, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thanks you!
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QuirkyBrainiac Featured By Owner May 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome!
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:iconellen-souler:
Ellen-Souler Featured By Owner May 26, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
yey
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QuirkyBrainiac Featured By Owner May 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
woo!
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SweetBabyCake Featured By Owner May 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I really enjoyed reading this!! I think it is really great!
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Ellen-Souler Featured By Owner May 25, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
That is very nice and a watch too? :icondragonhug:
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SweetBabyCake Featured By Owner May 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
haha what can i say, i'm just a very generous person!
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Ellen-Souler Featured By Owner May 25, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Well your avatar is cake...everyone likes cake, everyone eats quite a lot of cake. So yes I'll agree!
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SweetBabyCake Featured By Owner May 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha! Oh, Thank you for the Llama!! :boing:
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Ellen-Souler Featured By Owner May 25, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
np at all :3
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Hyalma Featured By Owner May 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Very nice, dear!
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:iconellen-souler:
Ellen-Souler Featured By Owner May 25, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thanks but I fear my writing isn't really going anywhere but thanks
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Hyalma Featured By Owner May 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Writing can simply be a way for you to express yourself, it doesn't have to be going somewhere. If that's what you want though, you have to keep working on it. Don't despair.
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Ellen-Souler Featured By Owner May 25, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Well I write both for myself, and to get out there but not through popularity more so just..showing the world my words I suppose but thanks
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Hyalma Featured By Owner May 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Just keep writing, darling. :)
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Ellen-Souler Featured By Owner May 25, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
will do!
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