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Make your poem suffer,
it needs to know how you feel.

And if it doesn't, your poem is ignorant.

Gouge the pen deep within it, until bloody ink stains through.
Write very hard
so your poem can feel your scars.

If you crinkle the corners,
good;
it needs to have broken tattered bones.
Feeling exhausted before your done.

Do not share or post your poem so soon,
for it needs to feel rejection.

Most important, before it dies.

Never..

Clean it's wounds, or tape its rips,
do no accept forgiveness..

As your poem dies, you'll be surprised.

Your dead withered poem,
has found
new life.
Never say sorry
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AquaRock Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
You put in some work with this poem! 
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Ellen-Souler Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I tried thank you
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Whisper-sylvya Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2014  Student Writer
This is an amazing piece. I've always firmly believed that poetry about pain is the most honest, because it is one of the strongest emotions. Truly beautiful. 
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Ellen-Souler Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Love is the counter part to this emotion, it inspires a lot of writing even though it may be gooey and whimsical. But thank you, tends to be when I write very well. 
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Whisper-sylvya Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2014  Student Writer
I definitely agree. It's amazing. :)
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iMariposa Featured By Owner May 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow . . . this was beautiful! 
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Ellen-Souler Featured By Owner May 23, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thank you very much
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Shinseinasenshi Featured By Owner May 17, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I love it all except the 

"Never..

Clean it's wounds, or tape its rips, 
do no accept forgiveness.."

For a time is fine, it's in design,
but soon you'll find, a broken line.

To be forgiven, you must forgive.
You must not live in, "live let live."

Or "one" will surely "die" my friend.

:(
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Ellen-Souler Featured By Owner May 23, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Actually my emotions are displayed in an abstract manner, I believe in forgiveness always. If I would have not forgiven certain people in my life I'd be like most people that choose that path, and that is hurt and cold, only hurting others. I have learned this over time, that if those that didn't accept me who move on in life, do the same to others. 

I forgive others, not my emotions for they can be irrational or rational, they only reflect my mistakes. When you read my work i'm sorry if you'll be perplexed my writing can mean how i'm feeling, not how i'm feeling or have nothing to do with my beliefs at all. Not sure why I write like so.
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Shinseinasenshi Featured By Owner May 24, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Forgive me then if I seem preachy, but as one who has been filled with the love of Christ and His Holy Spirit, I can't help but impart a view on life that many never seem to grasp. Living in "two dimensions" walking in the "will of one's own heart" and allowing that to supersede your own emotions. I only know, because it's happen to me before. Until I decided to let go of my heart, where it should have been in the first place.

In the Hands of my Father in Heaven. :)

All things though. Because if it never happened....   

Then I wouldn't be imparting this to you my friend. ;)
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Ellen-Souler Featured By Owner May 24, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Iv'e already done what you have told me really. My heart is with who it belongs with most but it does not mean in a lesser meaning my heart can belong to others, just not in a spiritual way just a way of principle 
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Shinseinasenshi Featured By Owner May 25, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Fair Enough. Fair well.
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:iconellen-souler:
Ellen-Souler Featured By Owner May 25, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
What do you mean by fair well? I'm not going anywhere, are you?
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Shinseinasenshi Featured By Owner May 25, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Of course not. :)
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Ellen-Souler Featured By Owner May 25, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yaaaaaaaay. I read one of your featured poems, it was nice. 
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jadewhisper Featured By Owner May 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
..holy.
this is beautiful, amazing work. e-e
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Ellen-Souler Featured By Owner May 9, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Why thank you ><
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jadewhisper Featured By Owner May 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
o3o, np.
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XdarkXnXdeadlyX Featured By Owner May 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Amazing! such creativity and originality!
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Ellen-Souler Featured By Owner May 7, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thank you lots 
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XdarkXnXdeadlyX Featured By Owner May 8, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
welcome ^.^
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Elguardiuz Featured By Owner May 3, 2014
Beautiful.
Truly magnificent.
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:iconellen-souler:
Ellen-Souler Featured By Owner May 3, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
danke very much
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brody768 Featured By Owner May 3, 2014
this is really good like really good
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Ellen-Souler Featured By Owner May 3, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
well thank you for you really nice comment
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brody768 Featured By Owner May 3, 2014
hehe what can i say i have a thing poems and yours tops the list of ones i like
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Ellen-Souler Featured By Owner May 3, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thanks a lot :3
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brody768 Featured By Owner May 3, 2014
welcome :D
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NykiiLynn Featured By Owner May 3, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
i...fucking...LOVE THIS
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Ellen-Souler Featured By Owner May 3, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thank you very mush
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shaymind Featured By Owner May 2, 2014
awesome poem, thank you for posting this! i hear this policy for every type of writing, and it seems to work, i guess.
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Ellen-Souler Featured By Owner May 3, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
It depends, but this is for a more depressive tone of course. Thanks you
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shaymind Featured By Owner May 3, 2014
yeah. it adds texture, kind of like i hear scars do- the inside of the story isn't as pretty, but it's far more interesting. many of my favorite authors seem to do this. I try, but i don't know much pain of sadness, so all i can do is a blurry echo of emotions from other stories, a peicemeal combination where no one part is wholy mine, but the way they fit may be. ~ kinda like fanfiction with emotions ~
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Ellen-Souler Featured By Owner May 3, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
your right, you rather intriguing I think i'll watch you
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Sammylovesyoulots Featured By Owner May 2, 2014  Student Writer
Beautifully written.
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Ellen-Souler Featured By Owner May 2, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
danke
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PaintedWolff Featured By Owner May 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I really like this one, it reminds me of what I said earlier, that you're poem is a reflection of your pain, that it for it to be good you must relate. You're poem must feel your suffering.
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Ellen-Souler Featured By Owner May 2, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Know what i'm sayin?
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Ellen-Souler Featured By Owner May 2, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yeah. Well what's suffering more is my comments and favs. But hey what ever, that's the point of sharing I guess.
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RuntOfTheLitter Featured By Owner May 3, 2014
HELLO! ....

One should have the VIEWS and COMMENTS and FAVS that
ROTL has before one 'complains' ....

WINK!

My BEST to you and yours,

ROTL/RuntOfTheLitter
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Ellen-Souler Featured By Owner May 3, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
 Well I like to complain, but thanks
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RuntOfTheLitter Featured By Owner May 5, 2014
HELLO, again!

As I've gotten OLDER, I've always TRIED
my BEST to 'complain' FOR OTHERS ....

I've been given MORE than I surely deserve in LIFE ....

My BEST again, ROTL
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PaintedWolff Featured By Owner May 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I hate when you write a poem and no one comments. It makes me feel bad about my writing,
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Ellen-Souler Featured By Owner May 2, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Why would it make you feel bad about your writing? I used to get 30 favs and up per poem but not anymore, I guess being inactive for months ruined what I had here. 
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PaintedWolff Featured By Owner May 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
It makes me feel it's not good enough to receive comments, it doesn't hook the read enough for them to tell me what they think. It's insignificant or boring, not comment worthy.
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shaymind Featured By Owner May 2, 2014
i know when i read something, i rarely can think of anything to really say, and posting "awesome story, thank you for posting" starts to make you feel stupid once you run through every phrase in you theasuraus twice. does that make sense, or is that just me?
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PaintedWolff Featured By Owner May 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah I do the same thing, but it is annoying when no one comments for a while
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Ellen-Souler Featured By Owner May 2, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Or people are just picky, lazy, un-cultured, have no time or just don't care. Deviant art is full of different art, styles pictures but capturing attention is hard here, getting a DD is imposslbie if your not popular or lucky
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