"Rest in peace"
Or at least,
what we all think it means.
How may I rest, six feet under;
in a tomb?
Alone and cold, in soiled womb?
They said, after death,
"You have nothing to worry."
"Reside in purgatory"
Why bury me in damp grave?
So far away from heavens gates?
I feel the warmth, know it well.
Another half inch, I'd burn in hell.
But in this shell, lifeless; sedated.
Ironic you wanted me cremated.
Is this wrong? Or is this right?
jokes on me I guess that's life.
At least for some,
"Reveal in Paradise"
Something I thought about at work when I was bored. No I don't work at a morgue ._.
nice and morbid, but still not bleak, at least by the morbid meaning pertaining to death.
This much reflects my own tastes in poetry when I use to write it. I really do like it, and found I enjoyed it more with each line.
This is brilliant. XD I love how it flows and each R.I.P
Interesting idea. I personally don't like the idea of burial. Maybe it was that story from Poe about being buried alive. In this day and age you are most certainly dead by the time you are interred. But still.
This is really deep! Amazing!
This. Is. Absolutely amazing..
Definitely eerie. OUo Still awesome, though.
damn dude your a beast at poetry. i love this peom at of all the others i think. i could really feel the dirt be piled on me as i was to be burried and the hot ass flames burning my flesh off.