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R.I.P

"Rest in peace"

Or at least,

what we all think it means.

How may I rest, six feet under;

in a tomb?

Alone and cold, in soiled womb?

They said, after death,

"You have nothing to worry."

R.I.P

"Reside in purgatory"

Why bury me in damp grave?

So far away from heavens gates?

I feel the warmth, know it well.

Another half inch, I'd burn in hell.

But in this shell, lifeless; sedated.

Morbid pranks!

Ironic you wanted me cremated.

Is this wrong? Or is this right?

But heh,

jokes on me I guess that's life.

At least for some,

R.I.P

"Reveal in Paradise"
Something I thought about at work when I was bored. No I don't work at a morgue ._.
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shaymind Featured By Owner May 4, 2014
nice and morbid, but still not bleak, at least by the morbid meaning pertaining to death.
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Vvlad-vVolfen Featured By Owner May 4, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This much reflects my own tastes in poetry when I use to write it. I really do like it, and found I enjoyed it more with each line.
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Ellen-Souler Featured By Owner May 5, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Glad you liked it
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QuirkyBrainiac Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
hmm k
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The-Lost-Hope Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2013  Student General Artist
Interesting idea.
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:iconellen-souler:
Ellen-Souler Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thank you
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The-Lost-Hope Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2013  Student General Artist
You're welcome :)
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tearsofacrescent Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2013
This is brilliant. XD I love how it flows and each R.I.P
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:iconellen-souler:
Ellen-Souler Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thank you :3
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tearsofacrescent Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2013
You are most welcome :)
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