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R.I.P

"Rest in peace"

Or at least,

what we all think it means.

How may I rest, six feet under;

in a tomb?

Alone and cold, in soiled womb?

They said, after death,

"You have nothing to worry."

R.I.P

"Reside in purgatory"

Why bury me in damp grave?

So far away from heavens gates?

I feel the warmth, know it well.

Another half inch, I'd burn in hell.

But in this shell, lifeless; sedated.

Morbid pranks!

Ironic you wanted me cremated.

Is this wrong? Or is this right?

But heh,

jokes on me I guess that's life.

At least for some,

R.I.P

"Reveal in Paradise"
Something I thought about at work when I was bored. No I don't work at a morgue ._.
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shaymind Featured By Owner May 4, 2014
nice and morbid, but still not bleak, at least by the morbid meaning pertaining to death.
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Vvlad-vVolfen Featured By Owner May 4, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This much reflects my own tastes in poetry when I use to write it. I really do like it, and found I enjoyed it more with each line.
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Ellen-Souler Featured By Owner May 5, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Glad you liked it
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QuirkyBrainiac Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
hmm k
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The-Lost-Hope Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2013  Student General Artist
Interesting idea.
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Ellen-Souler Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thank you
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The-Lost-Hope Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2013  Student General Artist
You're welcome :)
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tearsofacrescent Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2013
This is brilliant. XD I love how it flows and each R.I.P
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Ellen-Souler Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thank you :3
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tearsofacrescent Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2013
You are most welcome :)
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Redbuick95 Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
love it!!!
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Ellen-Souler Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yay thanks for the fav
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Redbuick95 Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
welcome
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DyskoDelThunderback Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2013
Interesting idea. I personally don't like the idea of burial. Maybe it was that story from Poe about being buried alive. In this day and age you are most certainly dead by the time you are interred. But still.
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Ellen-Souler Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thanks for the fav and yeah it's creepy..those finger nails inside the coffins. Thanks
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blissfull-emo Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2013  Student General Artist
This is really deep! Amazing!
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Ellen-Souler Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you! :3
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blissfull-emo Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2013  Student General Artist
No problem :)
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UselessItalian Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This. Is. Absolutely amazing..
Love it.
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Ellen-Souler Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you! And thanks for the favs
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UselessItalian Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Of course!
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7Demented Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Definitely eerie. OUo Still awesome, though.
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Ellen-Souler Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thank you! and thanks for the watch
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7Demented Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome! :dummy:
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Ellen-Souler Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:3
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SatanicPsycho Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
damn dude your a beast at poetry. i love this peom at of all the others i think. i could really feel the dirt be piled on me as i was to be burried and the hot ass flames burning my flesh off.
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Ellen-Souler Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you 0-o
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