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Dear,

  S.O.S

It's been six months.
   Please tell me, am I in luck?
A while, since my ship had sunk.
   All my fault, and now i'm fucked.

Dear,

 S.O.S

It's been a while.
   Great blue sea, for many miles.
Trapped alone, on deserted isle.
   Poseidon, with who I had trifled.

Dear,

 S.O.S

It's been too long.
    Uncharted beach, I don't belong.
Sailed you to sea, I did you wrong.
    But kudos to you,
         help has come along.

Dear,

Anyone!

Help! I plead!
   In the sea, I bob and weave.
I swam I tried.
   Torn away, in riptide.
Is anyone out there? Left alive?
   
To-and-fro, I waddle and bobble.
Someone save, this lonely bottle!
Inspired by, "Deadisland Riptide" ([link]) Coming out soon. Thought it was a neat idea, that lonely little S.O.S, it's lucky it's not on the island itself. Oh and that, "Help" in the poem..yeah ;)
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weirdandproudofit Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2013  Student Artist
Loved it! It made me laugh, it's interesting, it actually has a story and a surprising ending. Great job :D
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Ellen-Souler Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thanks :3
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chancerox Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
this could be the coolest metaphoric poem i've seen, if it was meant to be that. awesome job.
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Ellen-Souler Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
It was a odd ball sort of concept, with th ecrazy guy sending a S.O.S too his own S.O.S but thanks :3
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chancerox Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i like it :)
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Ellen-Souler Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thank you, just video game poem nonsense
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QuirkyBrainiac Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Very nice!!
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Ellen-Souler Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thank you!
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QuirkyBrainiac Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Always!
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ArtofDezzy Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2013
It is a wonderful poem.It puts images in my head!!!!!! :)
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Ellen-Souler Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
oh so many imagines! Thanks
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ArtofDezzy Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2013
Yes so so many :) but your welcome ...and i love your profile pic :)
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Ellen-Souler Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
oops spelling errors oh well thanks even more!
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ArtofDezzy Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2013
You are welcome
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