It's been six months.
Please tell me, am I in luck?
A while, since my ship had sunk.
All my fault, and now i'm fucked.
It's been a while.
Great blue sea, for many miles.
Trapped alone, on deserted isle.
Poseidon, with who I had trifled.
It's been too long.
Uncharted beach, I don't belong.
Sailed you to sea, I did you wrong.
But kudos to you,
help has come along.
Help! I plead!
In the sea, I bob and weave.
I swam I tried.
Torn away, in riptide.
Is anyone out there? Left alive?
To-and-fro, I waddle and bobble.
Someone save, this lonely bottle!
Loved it! It made me laugh, it's interesting, it actually has a story and a surprising ending. Great job
this could be the coolest metaphoric poem i've seen, if it was meant to be that. awesome job.
It was a odd ball sort of concept, with th ecrazy guy sending a S.O.S too his own S.O.S but thanks :3
It is a wonderful poem.It puts images in my head!!!!!!